Language Evaluation 18 Feb 2011
BRICKBATS: Grammar: (1) We don't have any relatives that we can go. We don't have any relatives whom we can visit. (2) ... a lot of thing to catch up to do a lot of work to catch up on (3) OK lah It was fine. / That's alright. (4) He was so impressive because I had so many days to do my practice. He was so impressed because I had many days of practice. (5) I was so nervous that I cannot remember anything. I was so nervous that I could not remember anything. (6) My mind went blank upon so many eyes staring at me. Seeing so many eyes staring at me, my mind went blank. Vocabulary: (1) Good evening guys Good evening, fellow toastmasters, ladies and gentlemen (2) It's very ordinary but still very impressed It's ordinary but heartwarming (3) ... even when life is giving you shit ... even when life presents you with insurmountable obstacles (4) We are going to continue on with ... We are going to continue with... (5) leave a deep and impactful in the viewers' mind leav...